some people think that news and media are affecting our life in a positive way while others disagree.what is your opinion?give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience.
In modern world one of the most doubtable topics is process of developing of mass media. Even though some people think that it is the main catalyst of disasters, however others think that media it is source of information. In my opinion media sources have many significant drawbacks, which are disinformation and degradation. There I will prove this statement.
On the one hand, it is the main origin of news. While no one cannot deny this reason, no one cannot prove that materials, which are taken from this cradle, are truly. this fact is summoning resonance among folk, and separating them on two halves. it means that amount of conflicts of interests are increasing day by day and growing into global discordance. For example recently conflict between Russia and Ukraine, is connected with TMS (tools of mass information). The main reason is that mass communication media magnified given dates, and changed main details, which generated discord.
In the 21-st century the century of technologies, it is hard to find isolated from media sources place. it means that anyone in the influence of this direction. Therefore it provides addiction (especially among young generation) and that has effects on individuals’ knowledge. Moreover the grow of that determine decreasing of demand for written sources (books, encyclopedias).
To sum up, TMS is playing important role in persons daily routine, nevertheless they need to understand that this is not reliable origin. Besides they need to remember, that media it is just one of many sources, where people can dig information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, for example, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23921568627 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91698811872 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596078431373 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8784494693 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.5 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9375 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121688005411 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0353752258658 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390252434635 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698363623199 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385640891799 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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