Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
Technology significantly alters our lives, it allows people to do many things much faster, making daily routine much easier to manage. While I would agree that technology also adds some problems to our lives, I certanly do not think that it makes our lifes more complicated as a whole.
Many every day things that used to be a big problem to people, are now easily solved by technology. We have lighting in our houses that we turn on and off at will at any time, we get around in our cars, trains and planes, we can obtain pretty much any information in a matter of seconds through the internet. Before technology provided solutions to these things, it was much harder to live ones life. Technology helps us so much, that we consider all these things routine at this point, it is hard for us to even imagine living without them.
For disabled people technology not only provides additional help, but gives them the basic functions that others have from the start. Proper infrastructure allows these people to move arround more freely, technology helps deaf, blind and mute people to comunicate and is some cases we are even approaching restoring these basic human functions fully like for instance artificial limbs for people who lak them. It would be hard to argue that a disabled persons life is not improved by technology if without it they lack even the most basic human abilities.
Ofcoarse technology also creates additional problems for people. For example, before we had tthe internet with it's instant comunication we were not expected to always be ready to answer to any meassages, and be avalible for both work related and personal calls. This and other demands can make people more stressed, however, when thinking about this we tend to overlook all the positive effects technology has, we take all the benefits for granted and forget them. If taken into account I believe that the benefits far out weigh any drawbacks.
I fullheartedly believe that technology makes our lives much easyer, while it has some unintended drawbacks, overall it still makes our lifes better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 388, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'effects'' or 'effect's'?
Suggestion: effects'; effect's
...is we tend to overlook all the positive effects technology has, we take all the benefit...
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Line 13, column 466, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e benefits for granted and forget them. If taken into account I believe that the b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, second, so, still, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 33.0505617978 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 354.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93785310734 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53452020157 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576271186441 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4523145024 60.3974514979 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.857142857 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 5.21951772744 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18311230991 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717777805594 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0966085132392 0.0758088955206 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141985331474 0.150359130593 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117543365181 0.0667264976115 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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