Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
there is a book by the name of ‘paradoxes of choices’ which notices the different choices we can select in our daily routine. As same as the book, I agree with the statement that people have lots of selections these days, although it can be wrong in some cases. In this essay the different ideas about the subject will be discussed.
On one side, everybody expects to find their interests considering the diversity of products. various manufacturers try to cover numerous tastes of human by their products so, it can help to find the one which fits for everyone. In addition to that, wide range of cultures obligates producers to find suitable choices for each society separately. Religions, for instance, somehow are the cause of selecting the clothes in different countries. Therefore, people can find what appropriate for their manners when there are several selections available.
On the other side, sometimes designers think closely to each other so it is true that some people believe that they do not enough choices. consider cell phones today and compare their designs with 10 years ago. At that time there were round, square, and even triangle shapes, although it changes to rectangular full touch screen mobiles which are totally the same today. Thus, we cannot in some cases factories force us to change our tastes by producing similar products.
To summarize, if we try to find various choices around us, it can be confusing to select one of them. However, by thinking deeper on this issue will depict us that there are not various choices in everything. people should know their real needs and search for the aspect which are vital for finding the best one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, in some cases, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01413427562 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59149640418 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597173144876 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.4209381929 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.6 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140674453287 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460743675425 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568827368191 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0865279996689 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503592093036 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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