the bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the most productive and consumptive of electricity countries in 2014.
Overall, these countries can be categorized in two groups. china and the USA were the leaders with a significant different among others. Meanwhile, other countries utilized the power 5 times less than the United states, approximately.
The pioneers, china and the USA, were produced about 5,000 and 4,000 billion kWh and consumed a bit less than their generations, respectively. The amount of electricity which was produced by America is about 4 times greater than Russia which was placed third with 1,057 of production and just 19 kWh less consumption. Japan and India were ranked at fourth and fifth which by 936.2 and 871 kWh production, respectively.
At the bottom of the list, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany, and Republic of Korea stood by power generation between 618.9 and 485.1 kWh. Moreover, their consumption was just close to 100 kwh lower than power generation.
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 67
- At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? 61
- University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages? 78
- The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and mke comparisons where relevant. 11
- Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are actually important for a country. 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: China
...tries can be categorized in two groups. china and the USA were the leaders with a sig...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88962527913 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641025641026 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.5562805198 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.09922157223 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607235204824 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110472817419 0.0843802449381 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108723130801 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139250774736 0.0819641961636 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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