Pollution is a very serious problem today. What are the causes and solutions?
Environmental pollution is undoubtedly one of the most controversial issues nowadays. This tendency is caused by several reasons and societies can take steps to mitigate these problems
First of all is the exhaust fumes leaking from traffic transportations and industrial plants. These fumes enter the ozone and react with other atmospheric gases forming a much more toxic substance. Carbon Monoxide, which is a composition of vapour from heaters, is a case in point. Secondly, there is overused of agrichemicals. Environmentalists reported that these chemicals contaminating both the soil and water. Fertilizers, pesticides or fungicides, to name but a few. Last but not least is littering. Hazardous chemicals allegedly leach out of household and manufacturing wastes and poison the soil and water bodies located nearby
The first solutions could be to increase the public awareness through education.It is essential that next generation is taught about taking care of the mother Earth. This is shown by making environmental protection a subject in the curriculum. Second thing is using public transports. The fewer personal vehicles are used, the less emission released into the environment. Lastly, the government should enforce laws to bring down the deforestation. It will provide a legal corridor for dealing with the acts of causing pollution
To sum up, pollution is resulted from exhaust fumes, agrochemical overused and littering. Nevertheless, we can take some actions to solve this hassle such as raising public awareness, using public transportations or enforcing a law on environmental protection
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 81, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
... the public awareness through education.It is essential that next generation is ta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, lastly, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66803278689 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2761132304 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672131147541 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 70.2476255036 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2666666667 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0908383055516 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0208688822776 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390419475587 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0619025474422 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517432427569 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.31 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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