Pollution and other environmental damages are caused by a country developing and becoming richer. This problem cannot be avoid. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What factors damage the environment and who should take responsibility?
In this contemporary life, there are many country more and more developing contrast of damage environmental and they are still not solve that problem. From my perspective, I agree with this argument and other factors or people should take responsibility would be discussed in the following essay.
Admittedly, there are some arguments in favor of environmental damage by country developing. First, government subsidies for development are believed to equalize living conditions among people regardless of their background family and need to have a better country in the future. This country developing also has environmental damages, tends not only to increase the overall pollution of all people but also to mitigate their feeling of protect environment. Second, country developing is one of the reason for environmental damages would probably result in a higher supply of highly negative workers because they reliant on modern country and didn’t know how to preserve environment. In fact, it is acknowledged that environmental is one of the important part imperative to foster economic growth and technological development in any nations.
Nevertheless, the resultant problems would be far more significant if country didn’t had solution for that and factors damage. First, a number of factors cause damages including poor farming, practices , excessive use for fertilizers and pesticides and leakage from landfills can lead to land and soil degradation. Second, other big factor that every country need to face is water pollution, air pollution, dumping or people waste packaging too much for shopping, that is damage on environmental. Third, many countries are facing global warming and the greenhouse effect, the ozone layer is seriously damaged, all of which are caused by humans and everyone needs to be responsible. However, government need to take more responsibility than other people because they need to have a strict rules or new rules for protecting environment. Example, government can banned and fines corresponding to the damage that person causes to the environment. It might possible to reduce air pollution that they can make a day for bicycles or walking, it can reduced some bad energy from taxis or transportation. Especially, it can make a green wind and water in the future. It, instead, would be a more country developing viable option if the resources were focused on peoples life and solve big problem as environmental.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 28, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[5]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'there are many countries'?
Suggestion: there are many countries
In this contemporary life, there are many country more and more developing contrast of da...
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Line 1, column 173, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...olve that problem. From my perspective, I agree with this argument and other fact...
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Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'didn't' requires base form of this verb: 'have'.
Suggestion: have
... far more significant if country didn’t had solution for that and factors damage. F...
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Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...amages including poor farming, practices , excessive use for fertilizers and pesti...
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Line 3, column 860, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires base form of the verb: 'ban'.
Suggestion: ban
...ng environment. Example, government can banned and fines corresponding to the damage t...
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Line 3, column 1043, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires base form of the verb: 'reduce'.
Suggestion: reduce
...e a day for bicycles or walking, it can reduced some bad energy from taxis or transport...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, still, third, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2238.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 416.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37980769231 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08597036347 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516826923077 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 719.1 506.74238477 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9061182013 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.647058824 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4705882353 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47058823529 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277563805244 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987767174219 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528149916239 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1961271189 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576035087831 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.