An increasing number of people now prefer to go shopping in supermarkets rather than small shops and local markets. Is this a positive or negative development?
It has been noticed in recent times that people choose supermarkets over small shops and markets in the vicinity for shopping. I believe though shopping in supermarkets offers advantage in terms of time saving, the disadvantage of sharp decline in income of the local businesses cannot be overlooked.
It consumes less time for shopping in the supermarkets than local shops and market. Everything, from clothes, grocery, home appliances, to cosmetics, can be obtained from the shopping malls. Wall Mart is good paradigm of this where all the utilities can be purchased under a single roof so buyers need not to roam here and there for buying various products. They can, substantially, spare their plenty of time to utilize it in other productive works. In contrast, in the small shops and markets in locality, users are bound to visit at different places for buying products for their day-to-day affairs.
Inclination of locals towards supermarkets is undoubtedly affecting local vendors negatively. Business of the local shopkeepers has been fallen sharply which is further cause of complete lock down several shops. Hence, they become unemployed as well as suffering to make both ends meet. As per calculations by central government, in my hometown New Delhi current year sales of local grocery vendors decreased drastically by 50% and a number of local shops has been closed. On the other hand, Big bazaar, Reliance fresh, Wall mart, just to name a few well known shopping malls in the city accounted remarkable rise in their sales. Thus, it is apparent how supermarkets are affecting adversely to the local shops.
In conclusion, despite the benefit of less time consumption on shopping when it is done in supermarkets, drawback of dramatic fall in revenue of local businesses is too dire to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 307, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'roam'?
Suggestion: roam
... under a single roof so buyers need not to roam here and there for buying various produ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, so, thus, well, in conclusion, in contrast, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84900241367 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1382296535 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248568733673 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883706868779 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740026906435 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145244174498 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395957105703 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.