tpo 52 colonization of humans on asteroids
The material discusses the establishing colonies of humans to live in asteroids. While the reading claims that this colonization would the best options because of many reasons, the listening disagrees and says that this idea is not practical and has serious challenges.
First, the author mentions that asteroids' low gravity makes landing a spaceship safer than landing on the Mars or Moon. On the other hand, the professor opposes this and points out that low gravity of asteroids has certain risks. The lecturer explains that it cause lossing of muscles' mass and reducing bones density. Furthermore, the speaker adds that humans who stay for short-time in a sapcecraft suffer from these consequenses, so there will be a severe health risk on muscles and bones from the long-term colonozation.
Second, the reading says that colonization on asteroids will be profitable given that they are rich in valuble metals. On the contrary, the lecturer refutes this and posits that this in not the whole picture. the professor states that the cost that should pay to support colonization on asteroids will cut down this profit from precious metals. Moreover, the speaker contends that increase the supply of these valuable metals to the Earth will lower their prices and reduce their profit.
Third, the author says that asteroids are easy to be reached because some of them periodically come very close to the Earth. Conversely, the listening contradicts this and mentions that asteroids may be easy to reach but not easy to return back. The professor explains that some asteroids come closer to the Earth than the Moon, then they move far away to a distance farher than The Mars. The lecturer states that getting back from an asteroid that as far as Mars would be a challenge.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 210, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...its that this in not the whole picture. the professor states that the cost that sho...
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Line 7, column 234, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...ds may be easy to reach but not easy to return back. The professor explains that some aster...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... far as Mars would be a challenge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, furthermore, may, moreover, second, so, then, third, while, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 22.412803532 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1373.03311258 109% => OK
No of words: 294.0 270.72406181 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07482993197 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5806353554 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 145.348785872 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527210884354 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 419.366225166 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 14.0 8.23620309051 170% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8659239525 49.2860985944 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.571428571 110.228320801 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 21.698381199 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06452816374 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174553986242 0.272083759551 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605940785736 0.0996497079465 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420679170819 0.0662205650399 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101149804353 0.162205337803 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0100494349507 0.0443174109184 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.3589403974 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 63.6247240618 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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