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The pie chart depicts the total proportion of three kinds of nutrients that cause danger to our health if consumed too much namely sugar, saturated fats and sodium are part of our meals during breakfast, lunch, dinner and snacks in the United States of America.
The largest proportion of sodium and saturated fat eaten is during dinner time while high sugar consumption occurs during snack time. And breakfast meal is significantly least percentage for all three types of nutrients.
Sodium as a common nutrient found in food and considered additives to mostly all our meals and comprises 43% during dinner time as well as saturated fat which is 6% lower. In addition, same percentage of 14% are consumed for breakfast and snack meals. For saturated fat, 21% are eaten on snack meals and 26% in lunch hour. Furthermore, for early meals sugar and saturated fat are both of the same percentage with 16%.
Sweets are often consumed during snack time such as cake and ice cream thus a nutritional value of sugar is 42% which is expected, followed by 23% at dinner meals and 19% at lunch.
- Computers are being used more and more in education Some people say that this is a positive trend while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your opinion 76
- Some people think that having people from different nationalities and cultural backgrounds living together in the same country makes the country develop faster. Do you agree? 84
- Some people believe that is best to a accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.Discuss both these views and give your opinion. 73
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- Ordinary people try to copy famous people either reading magazines or watching tv. Why do they do this? Do you think it is a good idea to copy famous people? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'significantly the least'.
Suggestion: significantly the least
...uring snack time. And breakfast meal is significantly least percentage for all three types of nutri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, thus, well, while, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91443850267 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48142171844 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566844919786 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8864888324 43.030603864 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.875 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0542510096889 0.215688989381 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0222302951364 0.103423049105 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588158325024 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0444605902727 0.15604864568 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770080012868 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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