You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask you manager about this.
Write a letter to your manager. In you letter
explain why you want to take time off work
give details of the amount of time you need
suggest how your work could be covered while you are away
Dear Serene,
Good morning, I am writing this letter to request you for a leave in the next month.
As you know very well, I am working so hard from the last quarter to meet all the project deadlines. For about 10 hours a day, I am doing my tasks as well as helping other colleagues. Even weekends are not exceptions from the last month or so. We are also so much appreciated by the company higher officials for closing the project on a happy note.
After immense pressure, I would like to take an off now from my work. I wanted to go on a holiday so, please help me to approve the leave for next month. There are only 20 working days in the coming month as per the companies calendar. Hope you note down.
Regarding my outstanding work, I will knowledge transfer Steve all the scheduler's and ask him to cover pending tickets by updating the users promptly. He can always reach me through email if have any queries. Kindly excuse me for the delay may cause for the reply. Thank you for your support.
John,
Senior Developer, IT Department.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Serene, Good morning, I am writing this letter t...
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Line 23, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Thank you for your support. John, Senior Developer, IT Department.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, regarding, so, well, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54922279793 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37496811974 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.694300518135 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3888653076 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.7142857143 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7857142857 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231576927624 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807473851835 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880239255869 0.0603063233224 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119311647025 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693420808487 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.