When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree
currently, more and more countries choose the second language as another native language, especially in some developing country where the public are forced by government to speak a language which is spread through many developed countries in order to fulfill some trade requirement, probably. most of us are advocates of this strategy, but plenty of problems have been triggered. so, I do agree with this statement.
As for several social problems which has been common like ethnic conflict, this may be simply because the fact that people will feel a sense of alienation when others talk in different language at first meet. generally speaking, language has become the only symbol of one ethnic group, which has cause that most people will regard someone who speaks the same language as family. More severely, normal dialogue may trigger furious conflict beneath two different languages. As for another problem, culture invasion, culture has become another competitiveness in current era, so culture invasion has been more effective compare with military force. Obviously, language is the main part of culture invasion. In this case, young generation follow the fashion language trend and are influenced by that.
another part of these problems is practical aspect, just influence in our daily life. I would like to highlight two common events, here. one is that different languages will cause the hindrance of communication. communication is the most basic part of daily life, so different language will increase the probability of misunderstanding. this will trigger another problem, unemployment, because international trade has been flooding, which cause that many enterprises choose to build factory in other developing countries. In this case, lack of language abilities will not be hair by them.
Overall, adding another language will lead to many inevitable questions, which may influent social security and so-called happiness rate.
- Asteroids are large space objects made of rock and ice There are hundreds of thousands of asteroids in our solar system Though we often hear ideas about establishing colonies of humans to live and work on our Moon or our neighboring planet Mars some think 3
- Asteroids are large space objects made of rock and ice There are hundreds of thousands of asteroids in our solar system Though we often hear ideas about establishing colonies of humans to live and work on our Moon or our neighboring planet Mars some think 3
- When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree 30
- The best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones. 66
- Asteroids are large space objects made of rock and ice There are hundreds of thousands of asteroids in our solar system Though we often hear ideas about establishing colonies of humans to live and work on our Moon or our neighboring planet Mars some think 3
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5049833887 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80859236622 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.0880950691 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5625 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8125 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4375 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0498358814119 0.244688304435 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0204505579541 0.084324248473 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327938001602 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0323991881286 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281771108135 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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