The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish.
The diagram demonstrates the process of life from birth to maturity of salmon.
As can be seen in the illustration, The release of salmon from birth goes through the process. We can see that salmon lived in three different places in their lives. it begins from one river to another to the ocean and eventually back and forth.
salmon life begins as the adults spawn and hatch their eggs. Young salmon are raised in fresh water for the next life cycle. After that, their maturity begins and they swim downstream to the river mouth to be reared again.
Trout are reared in estuaries and grow into adults. they started moving the ocean where they became adults. Finally, they went back upstream to find rivers to lay their eggs and the new life cycle continued.
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- The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish. 56
- Some people say that parents have the most important role in a child's development. However, other argue that other things like television of friends have the most significant influence.Discuss both view and give your own opinion. 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 640.0 965.302439024 66% => OK
No of words: 134.0 196.424390244 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77611940299 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.40232815919 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14894276357 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597014925373 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 185.4 283.868780488 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 16.7761735804 43.030603864 39% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.0 112.824112599 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.4 22.9334400587 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.1 5.23603664747 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249287598504 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977372821735 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916565568461 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162161062011 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775846210899 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.2329268293 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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