Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With the development of modernization, people nowadays are facing with more intricate relationships than before. under this circumstance, some people believes that always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. From my perspective, I disagree with the statement, and the reasons are as below.
first of all, telling the truth might hurt people's feeling in the relationship, especially for the people who lacks of confidence. For instances, on the students' party last year, my friend Susan weared a dress looks unsuitable for her. Although everyone knew it, I was the first one to point out directly. As a result, it let her felt embrassed, and she ignored me for two weeks. she reckoned that I was on purpose to make her lose face. So, I disagree with the opinion that telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Furthermore, there is existing more essential quality than mere honesty in the relationship between people. humor is one of them. when facing with a awkward and heavy problem, using the humor sense to break the embrassing atmosphere is more valuable rather than speaking straightforward, which engenders uncomfortable feeling. For instances, once upon a time, on the award ceremony of women's tennis in London, the national flag of Unite States was blowed away. when people were feeling embrassing, Serena Williams, told a funny story to everyone, which broke the awkward situation immediately. Thanks to her strong sense of humor, the remaining process was completed correctly. Consequently, I believe that it is more essential for humor than telling the truth under this circumstance.
Admittedly, telling the truth is also very important. For example, it could enable us to talk with each other frankly, which makes our communication more efficient. But it is disputable that every relationships requires this quality. Sometimes we need some communicate techiques to help the team in achieveing goals, instead of telling the truth which makes others embrassing or loses their hope.
Therefore, I disagree with the statement that telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, frankly, furthermore, look, so, therefore, for example, for instance, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1923.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46306818182 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03456834642 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553977272727 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0748166522 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5714285714 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7619047619 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04761904762 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156228382037 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508688452265 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597098769414 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110407678327 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641772552021 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.