The graph below shows the way people of Somecountry invested their money during the years 2001-2006.
The bar graph illustrates the proportion of money that people in some countries invested in two items: Bonds and Stocks over the five years period.
It can be seen from the graph, Stocks investment has the advantage over Bonds in the period from 2001 to 2006. In 2001, Stocks was invested 210 billions of dollars while bonds just hold the quite low quantity, namely 100 billions of dollars. Nevertheless, this amount of Bonds had advanced during the next years. As the graph shows, in 2003, the amount of currency in terms of Bonds increased gradually, at 157 billions. Moreover, it still raised to 188 billions up to 2006.
As is shown by the graph, Stocks investment occupies the substantial quantity from 2001 to 2006. In 2003, the quantity of Stocks was 227 billions dollars, and this number was continuing to progress over the period 2004 to 2005 with 289 billions and 297 billions respectively. Considerably, this investment reached the remarkable amount in 2006, at 311 billions of dollars.
In conclusion, Bonds is the investment item that people preferred to expend in some countries.
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- The chart below shows the expenditures of two countries on consumer goods in 2010 78
- The table illustrates the proportion of monthy household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment. 78
- The graph below shows the way people of Somecountry invested their money during the years 2001-2006. 73
- You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...stocks over the five years period. it can be seen from the graph, stocks inve...
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Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '210 billion'.
Suggestion: 210 billion
...1 to 2006. In 2001, stocks was invested 210 billions of dollars while bonds just hold the quite...
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Line 5, column 218, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '100 billion'.
Suggestion: 100 billion
...ust hold the quite low quantity, namely 100 billions of dollars. Nevertheless, this amount of b...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '311 billion'.
Suggestion: 311 billion
...ached the remarkable amount in 2006, at 311 billions of dollars. In conclusion, bonds is t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, nevertheless, so, still, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 929.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07650273224 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69053414612 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540983606557 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4425608804 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216831256902 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992672309545 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686993060879 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143914871116 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397251977958 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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