Both the lecture and the author focus on Rembrandt's paintings, but express opposing viewpoints. Whereas the author mentions that there are some reasons with his work that suggest he did not paint by himself, the professor strongly disagree with that statement for several reasons
To begin with, according to the text, the writer states that there is something inconsistent about the way the women in the portrait is dressed. She is wearing a valuable fur collar that servant can not afford. On the contrary, the speaker said that that painting is not original. From research, They found that the portrait was painted by someone around 100 years later.
In addition, based on the passage, Rembrandt was expert in painting light and shadow, but in this painting these elements do not match together. On the other hand, the professor states that the original portraits use simple color. The face of women was very relaxed, and look realistic
Lastly, the reading mentions that Rembrandt usually painted on wood panels. In contrast, based on the speaker, he saids that the research fround that he used wood from the same tree.
Both the lecture and the author focus on Rembrandt's paintings, but express opposing viewpoints. Whereas the author mentions that there are some reasons with his work that suggest he did not paint by himself, the professor strongly disagree with that statement for several reasons
To begin with, according to the text, the writer states that there is something inconsistent about the way the women in the portrait is dressed. She is wearing a valuable fur collar that servant can not afford. On the contrary, the speaker said that that painting is not original. From research, They found that the portrait was painted by someone around 100 years later.
In addition, based on the passage, Rembrandt was expert in painting light and shadow, but in this painting these elements do not match together. On the other hand, the professor states that the original portraits use simple color. The face of women was very relaxed, and look realistic
Lastly, the reading mentions that Rembrandt usually painted on wood panels. In contrast, based on the speaker, he saids that the research found that he used wood from the same tree.
- Do you agree or disagree the following statement? Television advertising directed towards young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed. 3
- TPO3 - Integrated Writing 3
- In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. 60
- TOEFL T P O 3 - Integrated Writing Task 3
- The Salton Sea in California is actually a salty inland lake. The level of salt in the lake's water—what scientists call its salinity—has been increasing steadily for years because the lake's water is evaporating faster than it is being repl 68
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, lastly, look, so, whereas, in addition, in contrast, on the contrary, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 1373.03311258 69% => OK
No of words: 187.0 270.72406181 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08556149733 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 4.04702891845 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38755531294 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 145.348785872 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614973262032 0.540411800872 114% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 419.366225166 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 2.5761589404 272% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.877555048 49.2860985944 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.666666667 110.228320801 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 21.698381199 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8888888889 7.06452816374 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.43485323807 0.272083759551 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13966867751 0.0996497079465 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1827220707 0.0662205650399 276% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276262765665 0.162205337803 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.348171416166 0.0443174109184 786% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.3589403974 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 53.8541721854 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 63.6247240618 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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