Some people think that teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives.Others think that adult life brings more happiness,inspite of greater responsibilities.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is indubitable to say that happiness plays pivotal role in human's life. A handful of humans believe that people can enjoy more in their teen period, however others in contrast deem that although adult life is full of responsibilities but it is the most joyful period.This essay shall delve into both sides of argument along with my own opinion.
There are various reasons to support the former view.Firstly,at this time children do not have any burden of earning money and fulfilling the dreams and expectations of family. Therefore, they spend their time in enjoying with friends and family without any stress in their life. Secondly, during this period all their needs are fulfilled by their parents, they have dreams in their eyes and a zeal to attain success which eventually is also a reason of their happiness.Thirdly, they have ample of time to enjoy each and every moment as they have no work pressure and any deadline to meet.
Turning to other side of the argument, adult life too brings joy in person's life.To begin with, this life makes person to live life on their own terms and conditions and are not dependent on others.Moreover, they are earning and can do whatever they want to do without anyone's interference.Not only this, This stage broaden their horizons, meet new people, fulfill their dreams which eventually is the reason behind their contentment.
In my perspective, both stages of life have their own pros because masses learn meaning of life during both periods.One is a formative period and other teach lessons and give experiences. Despite this, being happy is in hands of individual and optimistic nature can make the happy throughout their life.
In conclusion, person should enjoy every phase of life.Although teenage life is beautiful period of life which is free of tensions and worries but adult life also play crucial role in adding enjoyment in person's life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, in conclusion, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05362776025 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75775100723 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555205047319 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.767238889 49.4020404114 218% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 178.0 106.682146367 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.2222222222 20.7667163134 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.5555555556 7.06120827912 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132445281684 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630862138783 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380266713783 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0864657379798 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031437749746 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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