Children should always follow their parents' advice. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is a fact that family is one of the most important conditions in our development. Therefore, while some people think that children should observe their parents´ guidance, other claim that this is not always right. In my opinion that children should do it when they are young, but they should become more independent when they are mature.
On the one hand, because of the lack of authentication, the children cannot distinguish the difference between right and wrong. As a result, parents are the first teachers who will teach them about this. For example: a young child does not know that it is wrong to take things that do not belong to them. In addition, parents can also teach children about dangers, both in the home and outside like electricity is a very dangerous thing for children. Besides, parents are having more experience in life than their child, cause their age not as young as a kid. People who taught children how to stand, walk, run and encouraged them to go to school, most is their mom and dad. For me, my parent cannot best in other people's eye, but they are the best people to me.
On the other hand, I would argue that if one child wants to become mature not only for physical but also for mental, the independent thinking is one of the most useful factors for maturity because the children cannot live their whole life with dependence 100% into their parents. Parents might tell a child which career to choose and this should be the child's decision because when they grow up, they can realize that right or wrong thing and they want to do anything what they like without follow their parents' advice. From a social development perspective, if we compare the acumen between younger and elderly, it is clearly to seen that the adolescence can be more suitable than their parents. Therefore, if they continue to follow their parents´ advice, they cannot develop themselves to adapt with the social changing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 830, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lves to adapt with the social changing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, so, then, therefore, while, for example, in addition, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79525222552 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45980284037 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516320474777 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2998531915 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.428571429 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0714285714 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252792991566 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878184122389 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621348373942 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18406011891 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279545393963 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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