The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999.
The pie chart depicts the output of distribution of visitors to different types of tourists attractions in Britain, 1999. The table represents the number of people who visited different parts of the theme park.
Overall, the theme parks contributed the largest segment of the visitors liked place while the wildlife parks and Zoos made the lowest contribution by attracting the tourist's place. Inside the theme parks, people loved to visit more in Blackpool pleasure beach and the least would be the both Chessington world of adventures and Legoland, Windsor.
On the one hand, theme parks contributed to 38% and it is the highest number of tourists place in Britain. However, inside the theme parks, it is distinguished clearly and said that the most number of people visit in the Blackpool pleasure beach with 47% of the 38% of theme park and following by the Alton towers and pleasure land, Southport with 17% and 16% respectively. Both Chessington world of adventures and Legoland, Windsor is at the last position with 10%.
On the other hand, Museums and galleries are just 1% behind the theme parks and it is the second-largest segment by the people attraction following by the historic houses and monuments is at the third place with 16%. The last segment is the wildlife parks zoos with 9% only people attracted.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...both Chessington world of adventures and Legoland, Windsor. On the one hand,...
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Suggestion:
...one hand, theme parks contributed to 38% and it is the highest number of tourists...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, so, third, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1115.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04524886878 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6904476635 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47963800905 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 317.7 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9444195316 43.030603864 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.888888889 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5555555556 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170419574702 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087567296556 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802424053172 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13408293652 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105903298137 0.0819641961636 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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