You are going to have a family party in a private room in a hotel.
Write a letter to the hotel manager and say:
• why you need to use this private room
• what you need them to provide for the party
• inquire about the price of the food you are ordering
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my interest for booking a private room in your hotel for a family party.
I would like to reserve a private room for a dinner party in your Hotel Radisson to celebrate my parents 50th marriage anniversary on 12th of December. We are expecting 50 guests on this occasion.
Kindly decorate the entire room with roses white lilies and set a big screen with a projector to display photographs of my parents. I want a buffet arrangement both vegetarian and non-vegetarian along with alcoholic and non-alcoholic drinks and moreover, please arrange a special kid’s zone as well for children and a chocolate and strawberry cake with Happy 50th Anniversary to Mom and Dad written on the top of the cake.
I would request you kindly send me the food and drink menu with prices quotation and also the cost incurred for arranging the entire party inclusive of the service tax and all the other charges. Additional please inform us the maximum discount you can offer to us for arranging the part.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 198, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e expecting 50 guests on this occasion. Kindly decorate the entire room with ros...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92670157068 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7308972794 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638743455497 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.6870421798 44.8134815571 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.555555556 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235754475736 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905446012733 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711819168772 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140402980862 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660925583858 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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