You live in a rented accommodation which was recently damaged due to the bad weather.
Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter:
- explain what caused the damage
- why do you need them to fix the problem right away?
- what needs to be done to fix it?
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to inform you that the bad weather condition had been detrimental to the house where I am staying as a tenant for the last one year.
last night; the heavy rains and fierce storms has broken many windows of my house. Moreover, the broken tree branches have not only wrecked the main entrance door of the house completely, but also have damaged the furniture, walls and flooring by entering through the shattered windows.
The freezing winds and rains are entering through the smashed windows thus making it unbearable to stay. Furthermore, the main front door is jammed, the furniture is broken and the plaster of the walls is falling off because of the broken branches, as a result, it is impossible to open the door and move out of the house.
I would request you to kindly arrange a carpenter for repairing the damages caused to windows, furniture and the main door of the house, Additionally, please send the painter also to repair the damaged walls.
I hope you will understand the seriousness of the situation and will take immediate actions. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Last
...g as a tenant for the last one year. last night; the heavy rains and fierce storm...
^^^^
Line 11, column 94, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...uation and will take immediate actions. I look forward to hearing from you soon. ...
^
Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...earing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^
Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n. Yours sincerely, Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, look, moreover, so, thus, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54894095655 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.3191493861 44.8134815571 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.666666667 76.5299724578 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 4.34317383033 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121937230525 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458085891365 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415857763038 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0657266208399 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045904244443 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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