Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside. Why do think this happen? Do you think this as a positive or a negative development?
Opting to live in cities and towns as compared to villages have become common among the youngsters but elder still living at those places, because those places have not much environmental issues. Juveniles think that metropolis provide them numerous option of employment, education & health facilities. I think the impact of this approach is adverse.
People after the age of 45, have become more health concious. So, they eat organic food which give them complete vitamins, protien and minerals and these nurtion can only be available at village surrondings because of farming specialality. Whereas people of modern era only think about career, education and fashion that standard can only be meet in muncipality environment due to the availability of industry, colleges and hospitals. To illustrate, as per a survey report people after their retirement are moving towards countryside so that they can live long and healthy life. On the same youth generation are shifiting in metro cities in the search of better placement and quality education. Therefore both ages have their own prespective to change their place of living.
Real fact of this situation is worst because, now young individuals are living seperate from their elders and they are forgetting about their culture, tradition and become unethical due to the lack of supervision and right guidance by their parents. Moreover health issues are becoming severe and lifeline are going deplete, because the consumption of polluted oxygen and water. In a recent news, editor described the comparison of health map between cities residents and villagers, which showed that the lungs of a cities citizen has damaged 80% more than a person belongs to village. Hence social values and health of city’s people are near to death.
Conclusively, settling career, and learning from cities can help someone financially, but physics and moral values can not be ingnored at any cost.
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Suggestion: Moreover,
...on and right guidance by their parents. Moreover health issues are becoming severe and l...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cities'' or 'city's'?
Suggestion: cities'; city's
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, whereas, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35830618893 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69263721273 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628664495114 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0254182535 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.5 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161420877742 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577727698406 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483261052001 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885321577277 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424474920662 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.