Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People in today’s world have become too dependent on automobiles. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Automobiles have become very essential part for most of the families in any part of the world. Some people think that its better to wal rather than dependent on vehicle. On the other hand, others believe that it si very important.
I totally agree that humans in this generation have been relying more on automobiles. I agree beacause of the several reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, vehicles helps us to save our lots of time. As transportation facilities has increased, it has become more beneficial for us whcih ultimately saves time. My own example is compelling example of it. I was working in cornwall which is situated sixty miles away from my place that is Ottawa. When I got the job, initially I was commuting in public transport which took me about 2 hours for one way and same back to return. Then, I bought my car in one month which now takes only one hour back and forth.In this way, use of vehicle may prove beneficial for us in our work.
Furthermore, cars may be very comfortable for all the family member or friends to visit at the same and enjoying together. Lets take an example of my friend Andy's family. His family has 8 memeber. Andy's father got eight seater SUV car in Chicago. Earlier they were having sidden four seater which many of his family member would not be able to travel together while they go for vacation. In this manner, having dependent on car would make a difference enjoying together which they could not if they were using public transport buses.Thus, with this new SUV now they can go for all the family member together.
Finally, automobiles may be used as passion. Many people are fond of having different types of cars and trucks. For instance, Elon Musk, who is the founder of Tesla. He is very energetic in making new cars and trucks. He made electric car which made a revolution in the field of automoblie. Moreover, he also launched cyber truck just few days ago whcih has elegant features which may prove to be fascinating for the future genertaions. Therefore, vehicles may become passion for some people.
In conclusion, I totally agree with people dependent on automobiles as it saves time while commuting, enjoy fun time together with friends and family and may turn out passion for some individuals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1906.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74129353234 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54278991464 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544776119403 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.7539782992 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.24 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.08 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127606853312 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037661434081 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415824455284 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083899130485 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044195546007 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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