You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have compl

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.

Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter

explain why you are writing

describe your circumstances

ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

Dear

Dear Sir,

I am writing to request my enrollment in the computer course about which I came across in the newspaper today this morning.

I am a mechanical engineering student, however I have always had interest in computer programming and algorithms. Despite the fact that I do not have any formal degree in computers I have won several informal programming challenges conducted by the infamous coding site "HackerEarth". Not only this but I have also gained ample knowledge in computer languages like Java and Angular by reading concepts over the internet. I immensely want to pursue as it would help me gain points to choose computers as my secondary subject.

I request you to kindly check if any special exception could be made to enroll me in the course as I possess the basic computer skills and vigor to learn.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours Sincerely,

Saba Azam

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, second, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 150.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11452511094 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.686666666667 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0093741213 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.75 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281124890397 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991687140767 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579500633751 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138182750034 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462384814367 0.0580467560999 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 8.71597938144 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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