Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter
1. Explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital
2. Say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do
3. Give details of when you would be available for this work
Write not less than 150 words
To whom it might concern:
My name is Giang and I am currently a medical student at the University of Toronto. I saw on The Local News yesterday that you are looking for a volunteering staff working at the hospital and I would like to apply for the position.
As I mentioned, I am a sophomore at a medical school and I am interested in achieving some experience before graduation. If I am able to be placed in a recovery room where I will take care of patients after surgeries, it would be great. Since there are some of my subjects in the school required practical experiments, the volunteering work at the hospital will provide me with more advantages compared to other peers. Not only do I have a great experience, but I also think this will help me with my career ladder after finishing school.
As for the working time, I am available weekdays after 4 PM and almost every weekend. Please shoot me a message if my letter interests you.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
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...hearing from you. Yours sincerely,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60220994475 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80398579071 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629834254144 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.6584011246 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5555555556 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220769420644 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850168955316 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648778311534 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108734734176 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644680047129 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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