Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think is fully justified while others think it is not fair
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is fact that successful game players can get a high package of amount as compared to other valuable professions. Although it is fair strongly according some people, it does not justified by others people. However, I believe that other professional persons should necessary to get a great deal of money.
On the one hand, who are believe that sports persons can earn more paid than others fields persons because they represent to the country in an international competition. For this, they can work hard and follow proper diet for a year only for a competition. As they can win a gold medal and make a record in the globe. In short, they can get more money than others.
On the other hand, other important professionals also work hard, but still they cannot get high salary. They can spend more time than athletics for work and some stream people are doing dangerous work. For example, doctors take a risk to save people life and doing a treatment. So, it is not fair for other professionals.
Finally according to me, other professional should deserve high salary because they work not for their nations but also for all around the world. For instance, the scientist are innovate an idea can use everyone, but they cannot more famous or no more people are know about them. Hence, they should get high salary than sports players.
In conclusion, due to successful athletics get more paid than other essential professions. So, some people think that it is right while others are not agree with them. Though, I feel that other professions should earn high amount of salary.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 181, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'justify'
Suggestion: justify
...ngly according some people, it does not justified by others people. However, I believe th...
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Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...at deal of money. On the one hand, who are believe that sports persons can earn mo...
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Line 5, column 26, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'believed'.
Suggestion: believed
...of money. On the one hand, who are believe that sports persons can earn more paid ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
... not fair for other professionals. Finally according to me, other professional sho...
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Line 13, column 179, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'innovated'.
Suggestion: innovated
... world. For instance, the scientist are innovate an idea can use everyone, but they cann...
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Line 13, column 264, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...annot more famous or no more people are know about them. Hence, they should get high...
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Line 17, column 152, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...k that it is right while others are not agree with them. Though, I feel that other pr...
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Line 17, column 169, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t while others are not agree with them. Though, I feel that other professions should e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, however, if, so, still, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in short, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86029411765 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53059778966 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514705882353 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4381627283 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7647058824 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94117647059 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316394489404 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115003504505 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621777084593 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201107458587 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730595624007 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 8.58950901804 77% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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