The graph compares employment rates in three sectors of the economy, in the UK, 2000 - 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph gives information about the changes in the number of people, who suffered from X disease, in someland over a 35-year period from 1960 to 1995.
Overall, for 15 years from 1960 a fivefold increase was seen in the number of cases of the disease.this figure constant for 5 years, before dropping to zero in the late 80s.
At the beginning of the period, only 100 people contracted X disease. this number remained steady for 5 years, before reaching a peak of 500 cases in 1975.
The number of affected people, which remained stable at 500 cases for 5 years, declined for 10 years, falling to zero in 1990. Between 1990 and 1995 any case was not reported in this area.
Flighting against X disease was successful, with the number of cases of this disease dropping to zero by 1995. this number stood at the same level (zero) until the end of the period.
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- Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films Whycould this be Should governments give more financial support to local film industries 61
- The graph shows the number of cases of X disease in Someland between 1960 and 1995. 56
- The charts below give Information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy In 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 744.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76923076923 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35203130975 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551282051282 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 202.5 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8583429159 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.25 5.23603664747 5% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0214178364258 0.215688989381 10% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0112446418277 0.103423049105 11% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0196820849706 0.0843802449381 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0140338188643 0.15604864568 9% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198093729607 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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