In many developing countries, there is an increasing movement of workers from rural areas into the cities.
Why do you think this happens?
What problems can this cause?
These days work migration in the business and cultural centres are trending movement, as more and more people of the working-age are striving to seek opportunity in the big cosmopolitan cities. In spite of the possibility of improvements in the lives of relocated households, there are some drawbacks are introduced by this development.
Firstly, the major reason of this trend is the growing demands among countryside habitats, as the Internet and TV are becoming more affordable in these areas, and the knowledge about the benefits of residing in urban areas becoming more revealed to all members of the country despite the location where they were born. Moreover, the spread of information not only burst the desire to relocate to peasants but also gives them the tools to do that easily and without involving to much stress. The Internet is a means to provide access to the distance learning platforms and Massive Open Online Courses, which gives them an ability to step out from their rural comfort zones and apply for the vacancies in the city's centres.
Notwithstanding the myriads of benefits for migrants, the migration itself cause several severe damages to both villages and the cities at the same time. For the villages, the massive brain drains will embrace the total decadence or in other words lead to degradation of the rural areas, as without workforce the households and farms are becoming obsolete and no one will fight droughts, sow seeds and handle livestock. In addition to damaging the rustic landscapes, the enormous migration might cause overpopulation in the cities captivating most of the workforce of the country. The cities infrastructures might not be able to handle too much of it newly arrived habitats, which will lead to traffic jams, shops and grocery stores' overflow, and real-estate crisis.
In conclusion, industrialization and technological progress have become the main driver of citizens concentration in the small business centres of the nations. This development probably inevitable and will be only increasing in time, which will continue to destroy the small settlements around the developing countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 476, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...to do that easily and without involving to much stress. The Internet is a means to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, in other words, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1821.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30903790087 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9313937324 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588921282799 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.4966744323 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.545454545 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1818181818 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129084977289 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424639963052 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404656318991 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.074624778624 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294689090649 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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