The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph reveals average of the co2 emissions produced per person in 4 countries The united kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal during the period of 30 years.
A glance to the chart provided some information in 1967, united kingdom produced the highest carbon dioxide emissions. However, the lowest emissions was produced by Portugal country in the same time.
between 1967 to 1977 all the countries co2 amount rose sharply except united kingdom which remained about 10.5 co2 in metric tonnes. Although, between 1977 to 2007 Sweden decline its co2 from 10 metric tonnes to 5 metric tonnes. united kingdom had a similar behavior from 1977 to 2007 with declining these emissions to 9 metric tonnes.
In 1987, Portugal co2 gasses in the air by per person increased from 3 metric tonnes to about 5 metric tonnes and it continued a steady increase. Beside that, Italy’s co2 emissions rose to approximately 8 metric tonnes from 1987 to 1997 but as the same Portugal behavior, it stopped from increasing and continued the same amount till 2007.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Between
...Portugal country in the same time. between 1967 to 1977 all the countries co2 amou...
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...mained about 10.5 co2 in metric tonnes. Although, between 1977 to 2007 Sweden decline it...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: United
...om 10 metric tonnes to 5 metric tonnes. united kingdom had a similar behavior from 197...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... 9 metric tonnes. In 1987, Portugal co2 gasses in the air by per person inc...
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Suggestion:
...al co2 gasses in the air by per person increased from 3 metric tonnes to about ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22105263158 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60951274891 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557894736842 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9412204837 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.222222222 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.77777777778 5.23603664747 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38262518602 0.215688989381 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15797264813 0.103423049105 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109494985689 0.0843802449381 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199066982548 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137225807371 0.0819641961636 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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