A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correectly.
Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the mordern world.
Do you think that benefit of tourism outweighs it's drawbacks.
Undoubtedly, the trend of pilgrimages upsurge on high amount therefore, it becomes biggest industry in the world. Hence various locations of the world where accounted as a chief source of money. Regrettably, travellers can also be a source of obstacles related to such cardinal situations. In this essay the pros outweighs the drawbacks and I will share my viewpoints regarding this, before reaching to a reasonable summation.
There are an abundance of reasons to justify my viewpoints regarding the benefits of tourism. The tourism is a key to increase economy of host country because pilgrimages are exploring the numerous of countries which are unseen by the masses who live in the world and the travellers also helps to climb the economy of various countries, through their spending on many of goods while they needed on touring. Consequently, the tourists travel in such locations and facilitates to their inhabitants with money.
Despite to it, there are a few of reasons why traversing has such drawbacks. Some travellers show their inappropriate behavior to another nations where they come to explore places. To illustrate, using vulgar words while talking with the inhabitants and taking oppose actions towards the authorities made a precise system. Sadly these kinds of things had been don and it continually pursuing by the pilgrimages. Eventually, the regimes should not ignore the mistakes of which had been done by tourists.
To sum up, through travelling, every region is getting mammoth positive impacts on their GDP rate. Authorities should be concern of drawbacks of tourism and implement some serious precautions to tackle the problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, hence, if, regarding, so, therefore, while, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36501901141 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93974140773 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615969581749 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2832649993 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.785714286 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160781471772 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492358316566 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635766860029 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931015349995 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057467208748 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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