Nowadays people spending too much time at work to an extent that they hardly have any time for their personal life. Discuss.
In the modern era, people always work hard and believe that they will get a better future once they finish their job. often public work for 6 days a week in the industrial sector and Monday to Friday in it and it'S companies and plan their personnel time especially on weekends. We will discuss both sides of these matters in detail.
To begin with, in 21st-century crowd always think about themselves and working as well considering these condition. Usually, they plan considering only on their individuals periods. mostly concentrate on personnel development and little thinking towards our community also they always interesting in their in-person matters and happiness. people are busy planning their future as well as getting more money to get desired and wanted life style since they were a child.
On the other hand, companies are paying double amounts to whom they worked on extra hours post their regular duties and them also happy with getting extra benefits from the organizations and work hard to gain extra and extra money. Further, to the addition of above all points, people are happy with getting extra facilities from companies and they plan personnel time weekends. they often spend time with family on weekends only.
In conclusion, it is hardly denied that people are happy with their busy work schedule and extra facilities getting from the employers, Because of additional benefits they also happy with spending extra time in the offices.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Often
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Suggestion: Mostly
...ring only on their individuals periods. mostly concentrate on personnel development an...
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... their in-person matters and happiness. people are busy planning their future as well ...
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... and they plan personnel time weekends. they often spend time with family on weekend...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1244.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18333333333 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46457893068 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 373.5 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.182102272 50.4703680194 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.090909091 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8181818182 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268445499242 0.242375264174 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112451694943 0.0925447433944 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051813754926 0.071462118173 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179747608743 0.151781067708 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325359996989 0.0609392437508 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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