A local college is having an international day. You want to speak about your country to students from different cultures.
Write a letter to the college head. In your letter:
Tell him/her about the topics that you are going to talk about
Explain why would they be of interest to the students
Ask about any arrangements that you need to make to give the talk
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Sorena, one of the students at the college. I have heard about the international day program on 23/05/2019. I am writing to ask if you could kindly consider me as one of the speakers at this event. I would like to talk about Iranian culture.
Iran is the first formed country and has been played a significant role in cultural development during different episodes of history. One of the most read books is a poetry book by a well-known Iranian poet. Therefore, it could be very interesting and fascinating for students to hear about the characters of this less-known culture which has a key role in our civilization.
For this speech, I need a big white screen and a video projector to be able to show my presentation and also some video clips. I hope you are able to arrange it.
I look forward to a positive reply from your side soon.
Yours faithfully,
Sorena Ashkani.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-07 | Walkish | 78 | view |
| 2019-12-13 | Sorena Eshkoor | 78 | view |
| 2019-12-13 | Sorena Eshkoor | 73 | view |
| 2019-12-13 | Sorena Eshkoor | 73 | view |
| 2019-12-10 | Sorena Eshkoor | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 114, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nternational day program on 23/05/2019. I am writing to ask if you could kindly c...
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Line 7, column 204, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e as one of the speakers at this event. I would like to talk about Iranian cultur...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 769.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80625 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83656372218 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68125 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5525158113 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.9090909091 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5454545455 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172698829177 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06552042154 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494233574494 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862318302265 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512792870034 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.