Essay topics: You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family
for six months and look after their six- year-old child.
Write a letter to the parents. In your letter
- Explain why you would like the job
- give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ
- say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia
Dear Madam,
I am writing this letter to show my interest for the job posted by you in an Australian magazine.I am interested for this job. I am a suitable person for this job because of lot of reasons.
First I have experience of teaching. so one teacher know very well how to deal with children. also I can help your child in his school home work. instead of that I am very good in cooking. I can cook food for your child when ever your child will feel hungry. I am also state champion in swimming . so I can teach your child how to swim.
I also like to walk in garden during my free time. so I can take your child on walk with me .Hence your child will stay healthy. I also love to paint during my leisure time. I can teach our child painting. I also like to learn new lanuages during my free time. I can help your child in learning languages. instead of all above I also visit beach during holiday.
I think all above make me perfect person for your child care job.
Looking for to hearing from you.
Thanks
Ram
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- You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town.Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods 73
- Essay topics: You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a familyfor six months and look after their six- year-old child.Write a letter to the parents. In your letter- Explain why you would like the job- give details 64
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...posted by you in an Australian magazine.I am interested for this job. I am a suit...
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Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... magazine.I am interested for this job. I am a suitable person for this job becau...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... First I have experience of teaching. so one teacher know very well how to deal ...
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Suggestion: Also
...ow very well how to deal with children. also I can help your child in his school hom...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: also,
...ow very well how to deal with children. also I can help your child in his school hom...
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...elp your child in his school home work. instead of that I am very good in cooking. I ca...
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...ry. I am also state champion in swimming . so I can teach your child how to swim. ...
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... I am also state champion in swimming . so I can teach your child how to swim. ...
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Suggestion: So
... to walk in garden during my free time. so I can take your child on walk with me ....
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...so I can take your child on walk with me .Hence your child will stay healthy. I al...
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Suggestion: Hence
... I can take your child on walk with me .Hence your child will stay healthy. I also lo...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... I can take your child on walk with me .Hence your child will stay healthy. I also lo...
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Line 11, column 207, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e time. I can teach our child painting. I also like to learn new lanuages during ...
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Line 11, column 262, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...learn new lanuages during my free time. I can help your child in learning languag...
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Suggestion: Instead
... help your child in learning languages. instead of all above I also visit beach during ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve I also visit beach during holiday. I think all above make me perfect person...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, look, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.26767676768 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13691362446 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540404040404 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.4171839706 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 46.9444444444 76.5299724578 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.0 16.8248392259 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38888888889 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 2.54639175258 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185021348208 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553006382683 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532670519548 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119561793893 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380747734319 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.2 8.37731958763 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.3 8.71597938144 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.86 7.59969072165 77% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.