Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own.
It is often argued by some people that children need to be motivated by their parents to join in team works; others' idea; however, are exactly in conflict with this, and they put forward the view that it is highly indispensable that children must be able to spend their leisure time alone. Nevertheless, there are rational justifications on both sides of this contentious topic which will be discussed in details, followed by a concluding view on the matter.
On the one hand, there are those reasoning that if children participate in some group activities, these can be extremely beneficial for them owing to some compelling reasons. First and foremost, such activities boost their sense of cooperation; that is to say, so as to achieve the best result, they should learn how to cooperate with other persons. In addition, it is a great way to master some social skills which in turn will be absolutely worthwhile for their future. last but not least, they get acquainted with other's tastes and opinions; this in turn enhances their tolerance.
On the other hand, the opposing view asserts, it is logical for children to have the ability of filling their free time solitarily on the basis of being able to stand on their own knees in the future. In other words, it is incredibly vital for children to be independent which this crucial skill can be grasped by concluding some tasks individually and without the assistance of someone. To illustrate, there are some circumstances that the person ought to deal with a difficult situation alone and if the person has the habit of tackling a problem by the help of others, the hardship can not be overcome successfully.
To conclude, there are valid arguments on both fronts of this controversy; on balance, however, it is advisable that each children is necessary to acquire both interpersonal and impersonal skills which they can be reached by blending with others to pursue a similar goal and finding a viable solution for a problem on their own, retrospectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 262, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...r sense of cooperation; that is to say, so as to achieve the best result, they should le...
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Line 3, column 473, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Last
...absolutely worthwhile for their future. last but not least, they get acquainted with...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, while, as to, in addition, in other words, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94117647059 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84242452189 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.2492490801 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.0 106.682146367 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0 20.7667163134 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324527394025 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132277946514 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872645942644 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200217077746 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582833912681 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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