Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.

Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

new Roman", serif; font-size: 17.007999420166016px; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">Without a doubt, there are contrasting views on when a child should begin learning a foreign language. Some people claim that primary school years are a perfect time to do so, while others hold that secondary school should be a starting point in this. In this essay, I will try to present my point of view on this issue.new Roman", serif; font-size: 17.007999420166016px; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">It is important to keep in mind that there is a belief that children grasp new knowledge very quickly at a young age, however, starting to learn a new language at primary school seems wrong due to a number of reasons. One of them is the fact that children still have insufficient experience with their native language, and primary school is the place to improve it through writing, reading and speaking. Another aspect is that learning a language requires a great deal of attention and concentration that children usually cannot show due to obvious physiological and psychological peculiarities of their age.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: New
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, so, still, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 175.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45714285714 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.68093155911 2.80592935109 131% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634285714286 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 506.74238477 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.2498632218 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 191.0 106.682146367 179% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.0 20.7667163134 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246997733388 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127333576594 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067113197781 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246997733388 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.8 13.0946893788 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.98 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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