With the increasing use and development of new technology,many machines are now able to do the work which people used to perform
Nowadays in our thriving world the pace of our life at the rapid stage. Many inventions are being created by people's hands. Most of them are being used for educational purposes, medicine and sport as well. Scientists have developed various creations that facilitating people's lives and work. Furthermore, there is a bad side-effect of it that should be noticed. In my point of view, advantages outweigh disadvantages because of its comfortability and availability. For instance, owing to them the quality of performances are improved and they become more emotional.
Firstly, technology is enhancing day-by-day. In our world, a big part of the population is anti-social, egoistical or shy. For them presenting performances is being a hardship or difficult to deal with it. Moreover, some renditions are complicated to manifest in front of people or the y are troublesome. For these people it a great choice. They can utilize technology from distant to solve these problems and they can be sure about the condition.
Secondly, technological bits of advice such as projector, monitor, display and speakers are very dangerous. We retain from our childhood that the majority of people are being killed because of them. They were accidence when unwilling mistakes happened and it causes people's life. If people more concentrate on pieces of advice the rule of using or warning the dangers the would be less dread and it can be beneficial.
In conclusion, I would say that technology is not a bad factor but there would be some misunderstanding if people do not follow the rules
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 316, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... lives and work. Furthermore, there is a bad side-effect of it that should be not...
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Line 1, column 322, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[14]
Message: Did you mean 'side effect' (=adverse effect, unintended consequence)? Open compounds are not hyphenated.
Suggestion: side effect
... and work. Furthermore, there is a bad side-effect of it that should be noticed. In my poi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27237354086 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08942555472 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607003891051 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.7536198082 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.2777777778 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2777777778 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141627276325 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434203093741 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423880548613 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084824004162 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271819711458 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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