The diagram below show the life of the salmon
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">A glimpse at the diagram presented outlines of the total presence of Salmons
According to the chart, the cycle originates from eggs. They are tiny and have a red brightness and bearing for about six months. After emerging from eggs, the means of Alevin is embarking that longs approximately two-three weeks, and it under generating progress. Consequently, the infant fish is born. In the beginning, it is not great with miniature paddles when they are fried they start swimming and stretch from five-to-ten weeks. Later, when Salmons developed and its mass also expanding in its dimension. Following, the fifth stage demonstrates two years old Salmon that is very immense and bulky. In this stage, the action of grouping is building and kinds of seafood occurring to combine assemblages of fishes. Adulthood of them originates when they are 8 years old. This process deducted into two categories the first one is with tooth the secondary is without it. In total, they exist for about eight-to-nine years.
Overall, the Salmon cycle procedure divided into seven segments from germs to adults. </span><br>
- With the increasing use and development of new technology,many machines are now able to do the work which people used to perform 56
- The diagram below shows the life of the salmons 84
- Nowadays, celebrities increasingly have status of role models, in particular for younger people 61
- Social media and internet 67
- Nowadays, celebrities increasingly have status of role models, in particular for younger people. 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 975.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38674033149 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06507864846 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674033149171 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6310000733 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.25 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0833333333 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.084504751309 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0269017154179 0.103423049105 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389303556653 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0753446054314 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357510421724 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.39 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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