A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Considering this recommendation of specificy the material that student should study during their pre college years is a restrectied way that have it's advantages and disadvantages to the stuednts and the nation it self.
The national curriculum for any nation should provied the best materials and have almost no flows since most of the students in that nation will study this materials, but this is not always the case sometimes the national curriculum is boring, dull and provied no benefits for the students unlike other curriculums provided by some organazitions which will give a clear vision for the students and their parents for the what exactly the weakness and abilities of each students in an engaging, self-learning and scientificly approved ways.
If we say the national curriculum is good and providing the benifitioalty of other curriculums why the restrection if the first place?
the nation must have a powerful learning system for it's sucsses and give the chance to students and parents to choose what is better for them, all currriculums in the country the national and others must be strong, engaging, and most importantly give that vision of the weakness and abilities of the students so that they can choose the best way for their career.
I see that giving more than one option is much better for the nation, but the national curriculum must be at the same level as the other curriculums so fairness and equalitiy have to be applied for all students in the nation, in case this did not happen people with the finantial capebality will get a better learning experience unlike most people in the nation which will cause that some talent and intellengent students will not have their chance to prove that.
In the end, having a powerful national curriculum is a strong and a must tool for the nation sucsses and giving other option will only provied more chances for talents to shine and for learning system to improve.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: IT_SELF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'itself'?
Suggestion: itself
...vantages to the stuednts and the nation it self. The national curriculum for any nati...
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Line 3, column 152, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... the students in that nation will study this materials, but this is not always the c...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...y the restrection if the first place? the nation must have a powerful learning sy...
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Line 9, column 319, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to experience'
Suggestion: to experience
...l capebality will get a better learning experience unlike most people in the nation which ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 58.6224719101 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 327.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96941896024 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69193065699 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 215.323595506 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.443425076453 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 494.1 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 23.0359550562 234% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 145.186852787 60.3974514979 240% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 270.833333333 118.986275619 228% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.5 23.4991977007 232% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324948703452 0.243740707755 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.190853219382 0.0831039109588 230% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453196220389 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190853219382 0.150359130593 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453196220389 0.0667264976115 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.2 14.1392134831 207% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 25.13 48.8420337079 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 12.1743820225 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 100.480337079 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 11.8971910112 256% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.6 11.2143820225 210% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 11.7820224719 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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