Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today.
What are the causes of global warming and what solutions can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Global warming has become one of the major issues in modern society, which is very harmful to us humans and future generations. Global warming can be defined as an increase in the temperature of our environment. This essay will describe the major causes and measures for tackling this problem.
Many scientists say that global warming is caused by the emission of CO2 and deforestation which damage the ozone layer, which protects the environmental atmosphere. My personal view regarding this problem is firstly, human activities generally disturb the balance of nature such as destroying rain forests for industrialization or urbanization, emission of toxic gases from vehicles and factories or nuclear experiments can lead to making the earth's temperature increase rapidly. Careless activities of people toward their environment is now becoming the major problem to the world because most people do not have any knowledge or idea as to what is exactly happening to the world or what the meaning of global warming is.
There are some solutions that can be initiated by the government and individuals for this problem. Firstly, the government can assume the main role in maintaining the environment by people aware about global warming and how it will affect the next generation if environmental pollution continues. Moreover, people should use electrical vehicles instead of using gas or petrol that can reduce the emission of a large amount of toxic gases into the environment. In addition,the government should control and introduce some laws to prevent large companies and industrial factories who release those toxic gases to the environment.
In conclusion, I believe the environment provides everything which peoples need its the most precious thing that belongs to us, thats why it is our responsibility to protect it.
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- Many students decide to further their study abroad. What are the benefits and drawbacks of studying abroad? 73
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- With an increasing population communicating via the internet and text messaging, face to face conversation will be a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 445, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'earths'' or 'earth's'?
Suggestion: earths'; earth's
...lear experiments can lead to making the earths temperature increase rapidly. Careless ...
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Line 5, column 472, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
... gases into the environment. In addition,the government should control and introduce...
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Line 7, column 82, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...provides everything which peoples need its the most precious thing that belongs to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, regarding, so, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39930555556 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01804628776 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579861111111 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.8346918378 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.363636364 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1818181818 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253930235582 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09729775075 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664811031639 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140385363137 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07997089826 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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