Many people are now spending more and more time travelling to work or school, some people believe that this has negative development while others think there are some benefits.
Discuss both view and give your opinion.
From some people’s perspective, there are downsides in spending more time commuting to work, whereas the others hold a superficial view of the positive side of this trend. In my opinion, longer journeys to work or school would have detrimental effects on the time and health of workers and students. This essay will discuss possible merits and demerits that come from traveling a long distance to the workplace or school.
On the one hand, there are indeed several benefits associated with doing longer commutes. Since most workplaces and reputed schools tend to be located in the interior city or at the city center, living far from those places is a way to have lower house and other costs. Commuting longer is also an opportunity for people to learn problem-solving skills. There are different and sudden things that would happen during the trip, such as car accidents, meeting drunk people and so forth. Dealing with such situations would allow people to practice problem-solving skills, which is essential for their life.
On the flip side of the coin, apart from the upsides fore mentioned, negative effects would arise from increased traveling to work or study time. Firstly, traveling a long journey would mean a considerable amount of additional time is consumed, which in turn result in time misspending. They can rest, relax, do exercises, do things of interest, staying in bond with family or other things with the time wasted. Secondly, spending more time commuting could result in mental disorders such as stress, increased anger, and some medical problems, affecting work efficiency. For example, driving too long on a car is one of the greatest contributing factors to high blood pressure.
In conclusion, spending more time on transportation from and to work would reduce some life costs and offers a chance to deal with situations in life, however health problems and time-wasting are also two handicaps of this trend. Hence, I believe that such negative effects are worth more concerning and considerations than the little advantages offered.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20958083832 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73801372104 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574850299401 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3335849048 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285132515189 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089453602559 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773595529739 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188140707391 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0879311686103 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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