in the future, the main reason for going to the shopping mall will be for entertainment, not to shop. Do you agree or disagree?
many people now assume that supermarkets occupy the trade market and extinct to small shops by their advantages. However, there are distinctive things help small shop against the effect of malls and making an equitable in a confrontation.
Admittedly, there are many advantages to why people choose supermarkets to shop over small merchandise. Firstly, the supermarket offers highly reliable and legit products such as commodities electronic devices.
Besides, the qualification like service is better and professional. Although having some advantages to compete with grocery, for all that, still not enough to put merchandise onto the dangerous situation. one day, you need to buy local products, only one way to buy it in the local grocery. Unique commodities rarely appear in supermarkets or malls. In a small shop with other specialist products, the seller has a major knowledge about your commodity who can exchange, giving a suggestion for your best choice, instead of only sell.
small shop, make a row sequence to form the character of the town and you have more choice there. For instance, in my country, it famous for the street with many house shops sell wood interior. Especially, about the normal products, it’s easy, quick to find in a small groceries near you without going to the supermarket so far. The many small shops and their distribution is a large positive point, it alive almost place with the identity of people.
I strongly believe that small shops can't be a threat by supermarkets by its remarkable features. Extremely, the number of small shops is emerging day by day caused by the population increase.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, still, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27067669173 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87792206493 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6787241415 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216123527268 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700465517429 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521420946813 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11780694362 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500545214661 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.