In the future, the main reason for going to the shopping will be for entertainment, not to shop. Do you agree or disagree?
- Nowadays, it is easy for people to find out a shopping mall everywhere. In the past, people just went to shopping mall for shopping; however, Developed entertainment activities is now outstanding so many people can go to shopping mall to satisfy both of their shopping and entertainment demands. In this essay, I will consider two reasons that I think why people choose to go there for entertainment, not for shop in the future.
- First at all, shopping mall is a suitable place for families to try a variety of food from many countries . For example, Vincom center systems have restaurants serve Thai food called Thai express or Lao food named Khao Lao and series of others restaurants from China, Korea, Japan, India and even the Western. So, I suggest that people should go to shopping mall instead of going to different places if you want to eat. Some of foods that people should eat are papaya salad, pizza, Kobe's beef, curries of India.
- Another reason that I want to mention is specific amusements are opened to attract people in shopping mall. Thao Dien Plaza in district 2 has an ice-skating area which is the unique place in Viet Nam you can try that sport. In my opinion, shopping mall draws people’s attention because Viet Nam is the tropical country and people want to see the real snow instead of seeing snow in the televisions.
- In conclusion, I strongly believe that entertainment will become the most principal reason why most human want to go to shopping mall in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81081081081 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68167907532 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579150579151 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8776113446 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.272727273 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322027916713 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142450472762 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115915109086 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202999221266 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107451914069 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.