The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The following bar chart illustrates how many males and females belonging to the 6 age groups exercised daily in Australia in 2010.
Overall, most men engaged in athletic activities during teenage years, whereas women reached the highest level between 45 and 54 in 2010. Besides this, more women trained during their adult years (between 26 and 64) in comparison to their counterparts, albeit both males and females plateaued at the nearly identical percentage in the most mature age group.
To begin with, even though males surpassed females by 5.1% in terms of daily involvement in fitness activities among teenagers, women reached higher levels in other age groups. Furthermore, males whose age ranged from 35 to 44 stood at the lowest percentage of 39.5%. Nevertheless, there were less significant discrepancies among 55 and 64 year-olds of nearly 8% and just above 10% in people whose age was 45 and 54.
In contrast, females reached the most serious level over 53% in the group representing people aged from 45 to 54. Even though females whose age ranged between 35 and 64 exceeded 52% in terms of engagement in sports training, the differences between teenagers and the most mature people were below 1%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, whereas, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1026.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68595886044 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7328591121 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.25 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.875 5.23603664747 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205037010214 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940412540706 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444873139584 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135131501745 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376007574118 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.