Write a letter to a friend to ask for his/her help to collect money for a charity organization. The letter needs to cover the following details: -Why do you want to collect money for the charity organization - -Ask for your friend to help -Explain in detail how your friend can help
Hi Matty,
I hope you are doing fine today.
I am writing a letter for your assistance in collecting money for a charity organization which I am due to start by the end of the week.
You probably do not know that currently, I am working as a volunteer member of the organization called “ feed the children” for the past 10 months. The charity organization has a target to feed over 1 million children by 2019 but running out of cash; therefore, I decided to take part to collect money to meet the above-mentioned target.
In this regard, I would like your help with this noble cause. You could help me to collect the money from the northern London because you are known to the people out there. Therefore, your reputation would help the organization to collect handsome donations from the area. Perhaps, you could help me to organize a fundraising seminar as you have an exposure in the field of event management, so hopefully, we would able to attract a large audience.
Please let me know if you are interested to take part, so we can catch up and chalk out the plan in the details.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours truly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70192307692 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75436716172 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586538461538 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.4967052853 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312927930451 0.216113520407 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107200681377 0.0766984524023 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.092641700559 0.0603063233224 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138078814936 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119058108851 0.0580467560999 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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