Traditions in two different families
The traditions are the behavior within families . Furthermore, all of it depend for the place they lived . If your familiy is for 2 different places probably you would learn different things . As your family twach you this traditions , you will teach the next generation . Every family has different traditions due to their past .
In addition, the past of the family defined their traditions . The older members of the family are the once who teach the youngest ones. So, these ancestor are responsible for extand the traditions . My grand father was from Uzbekistan while his mother was from Turkmanistan . Therefore , they teach my father the traditions of those countries.
However, the place where your grand fathers raised influenced the traditons of your family . If they born in Uzbekistan they would have the traditoins of this place , but if they were raised in Russia they are going to have their traditoin of this places . Therefore , your parents are going to learn from these 2 different traditions . For example , th mother of my mum was born in Turkmanistan , but she was raised in Uzbekistan . As a consequence , my grandmother learne the traditions of this two places.
Finally, any family has their own traditions . They would depend of the place where the ancestor was raised or born . Basically , it depends of the family past . The family members are the responsible to learn this tradition. So, they could be prepared to teach it to their young generation .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1221.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04545454545 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7513866192 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.438016528926 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.0539418056 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.05 106.682146367 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.1 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.3 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 3.4128256513 440% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350294693545 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133074506764 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117690191868 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233243232837 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863026774466 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.12 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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