Some people prefer to have one role model. While others prefer to have more than one.
In modern times, the issue of having role model has becom highly controversial. Some people think that attract one person is better. While other believe that having more than one role model make you have many experience in life more than enyone. In this essay I will discuss both sides of the argument and provide my overall opinion.
Generally speaking, There are a wide range of reasons why people think that having one role model is better. Perhaps the main reason why people are in favour of this idea is because one role model let you to have one choise and not to pay attention to another distruction. Furthermore, attracting one person make you follow him or her easy every single day. For example, if you have one lerson to follow you will be able to know every thing about him.
On the other hand, vast majority of people believe that having various role models let you to take the good things from them and avoid bad ones. Also, you will be able to gain a knowledge from every one which let you open minded. A good illustration of this is that many children imitate their favorite people suchh as, players, singers and actors.
In conclusion, having a role model is a topic which is extremely relevant to urban society. In my opinion I believe that have many role models are more convient than having one role model which can gain a littlee benefits from him or her.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 134, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hink that attract one person is better. While other believe that having more than one...
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Line 1, column 205, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun experience seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much experience', 'a good deal of experience'.
Suggestion: much experience; a good deal of experience
... more than one role model make you have many experience in life more than enyone. In this essay...
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Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'knowledge'.
Suggestion: knowledge
...ad ones. Also, you will be able to gain a knowledge from every one which let you open minde...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58870967742 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21759530307 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532258064516 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1569857078 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5384615385 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0769230769 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.467074789358 0.244688304435 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18685462813 0.084324248473 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134925699426 0.0667982634062 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.32302810397 0.151304729494 213% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114842184348 0.056905535591 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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