Teacher's Salaries Should be based on their students’ Academic Performance.
The author argue that the determination of teachers' payment should be depend on the academic achievement of students who they taught. it quite sounds reasonable to judge the ability of teachers on their student's grade on courses, I basically disagree with his opinion. The following essay will deal with the advantages and disadvantages to strengthen the inference for conclusion and cite the factors needed to be addressed.
Admittedly, we cannot simply ignore the importance of the examination and the modified exams to evaluate the student's skills over long periods. In addition, Almost social leader in our society outperformed during the college students and the probability of becoming right person resulting in great success for most subjects should be more than the opposite. Moreover, to determine the keys regarding on the judgement of teachers, referencing their student's outputs would be one of the powerful methods. However, there are still the possible rooms for the strong points of referring others.
First of all, even if the organizer and government try to their best to contribute the formation of the curriculum in school or college, the perfect examination through plenty of assignments and requirements is impossible. For example, if the teacher employee methods from the multiple-choice problem, then someone might got a point without knowing the basement of the knowledge to solve it while other occur some tiny errors at the end of logics or calculations. In the case of non-multiple choices matters, even the number of students in special situation will be decreased than the above case, the teacher have a rooms for errors. for another instances, the attitude for participation and patience to gain the results from experiments is not the parts of academic performances, but it is important for being a leader to contribute parts of communities.
On the top of that, the salaries is not the crucial keys to motivate the teachers. Based on my experiences, the teacher with confidences and passions do not focus on their money for compensation of the work. Meanwhile these people fundamentally loves their jobs, it's wondering teachers who only consider their payment will gave the best efforts to grow up their students.
Furthermore, their salaries must be on the skills and achievement of teachers itself. Speaking of the communications with their students and the level of influence of teachers with students will be the main issues. even though the academic performance of students are wonderful, the impact of teachers' will be little if they do not respond the students. what if some students originally are good at for all the course?
Lastly, the range of fields of all students will be envolved is various and unpredictable. Recently the Youtuber has been centered, but such named jobs had not existed 10 years ago. Also, students who are interested in drawing, swimming, architecting, or designing building will not be fairly judged among the current educational system. Therefore, teachers who gives attention to recognize the potential ability of each students need to be paid more than others.
In conclusion, we have take into amount of the dependence of teachers' money as a compensation of their working (teaching their students). Although evidences for the author's sides what dealt with such as accurate measurement, objectivity seems enough to conclude with agreement of his position, the author failed to substantiate the strong points to strengthen hi argument. if the author cite the evidences mentioned above, it perhaps helps to convince the readers who stands in my side.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, lastly, moreover, regarding, so, still, then, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, speaking of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 89.0 58.6224719101 152% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 12.9106741573 209% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3069.0 2235.4752809 137% => OK
No of words: 578.0 442.535393258 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30968858131 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90322654589 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95222076614 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 307.0 215.323595506 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531141868512 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 929.7 704.065955056 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2090398199 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.76 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.12 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.32 5.21951772744 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335650473106 0.243740707755 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096974898214 0.0831039109588 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743286397262 0.0758088955206 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174803509996 0.150359130593 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829408395524 0.0667264976115 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 157.0 100.480337079 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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