In some countries, the number of people who visit art galleries is declining. What are the reasons for this? How can we solve the problems.
The habit of visiting museums or art galleries to appreciate artworks has become out of date these days. I would like to suggest the reasons why it happens and how to tackle the relevant problems we faced.
Basically, there is a phenomenon that moving the public interest from art to other habits through the development of internet and mobile technology. Most people are more likely to have other habits such as games or Netflix which make people apart from the art galleries and art itself. Moreover, the art galleries or museums are not productive in terms of economics, the operation budget continuously has been reduced by the government or councils every year which results in blocking or minimising art programs or exhibitions which can develop new fields. It makes people feel bored in the art galleries and decline their interests from it.
To tackle those issues involving the decline of the number of visitors, making a new art exhibition or program to drag visitors’ attention is the first method to use. Especially a kind of collaboration between art and new technology devices can be effective. Additionally, creating more school curriculums in the art can be seen as positive to people who might have an interest in art but do not know how to approach the art field. This method is likely to discover potential visitors for future art galleries.
To conclude, many people do not visit the art galleries and museums as they have other habits such as internet games or Netflix and the decline of interesting art programs. So we can tackle those issues to creating more attractive art programs to appealing to modern internet-friendly generation and make more school lessons in the art to discover the potential visitors for the future of art galleries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, moreover, so, apart from, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01351351351 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84140702191 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510135135135 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6517321702 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.666666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280415605027 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113281074221 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408533241521 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183327530176 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206145726782 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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