You have recently moved to a new apartment. Write a letter to your friend and explain
-why did you move
-Describe the new apartment
-Invite him/her to visit
Dear Ayesha,
HI! How are you? Hope so, you are in good shape. I really miss you. Recently. I moved to my new apartment. this apartment is near to my college. I take admission in lahore university so I have to move in new apartment building next to my college. it will save my time for studying and I'll be able to come school on time
it is situated in good area. I moved in lahore I moved in China town. this area is good. People in my surroundings are also very good and cooperative. They help me to set my apartment
my apartment is very good it has bedrooms
And one hall. Rooms are wide and spacious s. I like the view of my balcony very much.
I want you to come n visit my apartment. I'll b very happy to see you.
Thank you
Pay my regards to ant and uncle.
Your friend
Maryam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Ayesha, HI! How are you? H...
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Suggestion: This
... Recently. I moved to my new apartment. this apartment is near to my college. I ta...
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Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... this apartment is near to my college. I take admission in lahore university so...
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Line 3, column 272, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: It
... apartment building next to my college. it will save my time for studying and Ill ...
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Line 3, column 310, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
.... it will save my time for studying and Ill be able to come school on time it...
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Suggestion: It
...ll be able to come school on time it is situated in good area. I moved in l...
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Suggestion: This
... moved in lahore I moved in China town. this area is good. People in my surroundings...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ive. They help me to set my apartment my apartment is very good it has bedroom...
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Line 11, column 43, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd one hall. Rooms are wide and spacious s. I like the view of my balcony very mu...
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Line 15, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ll b very happy to see you. Thank you Pay my regards to ant and uncle. Your...
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Line 19, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...regards to ant and uncle. Your friend Maryam
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 651.0 937.175257732 69% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.17307692308 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33004664267 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 127.690721649 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 208.8 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 9.0 16.3608247423 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5542874037 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 38.2941176471 76.5299724578 50% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 9.17647058824 16.8248392259 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.941176470588 4.34317383033 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241629188953 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0942831868751 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881691727828 0.0603063233224 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095555673065 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0947388308937 0.0580467560999 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 2.8 8.37731958763 33% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.72 70.7449484536 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.3 7.45979381443 44% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.13 8.71597938144 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.31 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 8.62886597938 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.6 8.54432989691 66% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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