In many countries imprisonment is the most common solution to crimes. However, some people believe that better education will be a more effective solution . To what extent do you agree or disagree
It is true that there are many measured used to cope with crime problems. While I agree that incarceration is one of the most effective way to felonies. I also believe that education is a replacement for immoral acts.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why putting criminals in jails is a necessary way to strengthen public security. Criminals need jailed in order to have no chance to pose a threat to other people. Serious crimes such as slayers, drug dealers or human trafficking must be eliminated in public by imprisoning or even receiving capital punishment. Without appropriate sentences, such people could lurk around citizens and cause more terrible evils. Apart from that, incarceration is also a useful method to raise awareness in community. Severe punishments could be an example for other people. They could have a look at acute punishments and be afraid of committing offenses. This has resulted in maintaining tranquil life of citizens.
On the other hand, it is wrong to refute the argument in favour of the efficacy of education to minor crimes. It is unfair when applying the same punishments on every cases. Punishments should be decided based on the level of crime. Minor crimes could be applied an alternative solutions such as social community services or education. Wrongdoers, who commit minor felonies deserve a useful member of society. After educating, they are able to use moral lessons and job skills to secure a suitable job. This also has resulted in decreasing the rate of unemployment in a country.
In conclusion, it is ludicrous to compare imprisonment with education to crimes because they are equally important.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: solution
... crimes could be applied an alternative solutions such as social community services or ed...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, then, while, apart from, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0989010989 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89423652798 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.9939974026 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.2631578947 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3684210526 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15789473684 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132131343609 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355064213305 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363369629751 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837761000664 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336080074603 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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