TPO 41 Independent writing
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
since the dawn of civilization, human beings have been putting all of their efforts to boost education systems. teachers are the most important function who people respect them a lot. since the advent of technology, some programs can teach children by the internet all over the world. some people are inclining toward the opinion that teachers do not encourage as much as past, nowadays. Whereas the others hold exactly the opposite viewpoint. I agree with the second group, and in the following paragraphs, I will explicate my perspective through the most outstanding reasons and provide some details which can aptly substantiate my point of view.
The first prominent reason to be mention is that teachers have a significant and undeniable role in one's success. technology can help to learn easier than in the past. but finally, it is necessary to go and have a course and solve problems with somebody face to face. you can not eliminate the roles of teachers in civilized societies. although in some countries they have a little salary in comparison with other jobs, they have leading effects on societies' progress. For instance, teachers have this situation in my country, but people respect them because of their impact on their world.
another equally noteworthy point that supports my idea regarding teachers' value in the societies is that teach some courses and sciences to children or students who do not any knowledge about them is difficult. Hence, teachers and training are very sacred and people love them. In Sharif university of Tehran, one of the most prestigious universities in my country, a very reliable research conducted recently. this study showed some awesome statistics which revealed people are interested in teaching and 65% of graduated are volunteer to become a teacher, although their salary is not good.
In short, all the aforementioned reasons led us to the conclusion that teachers play a dominant role in people life. Despite low pay and technology as an opponent which can teach you any skills, but people aware of this issue that someone must be to affect better and enhance children’s motivation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, hence, if, regarding, second, so, whereas, for instance, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17428571429 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75011094396 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568571428571 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0622346033 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.611111111 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136554997851 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438495629033 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339473885551 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0823231953874 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023563594599 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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